I like all your wording rainbow, except for the 5th one. The only thing I would change, as Pope has it, is the focus on the marriage. I think the beautiful scenery should always take a back seat to the actual monumental event. Nice work though.
Pen ~ I tend to think people are more likely to remember the last thing they read, not the first. Putting the most important point or phrase at the end is the best way of emphasizing it IMO. Like a closing argument. To me, its a difference of saying, "While at the aquarium, we are getting married!" vs. "While getting married, we will be at the aquarium!" Semantics! But to each their own.
Whenever I get out to pick up the hp 56 ink for my printer, I am firing them out lol Honestly getting sick of fussing with the lettering, so I think I am pretty much getting there.
What does it hurt to mess around one more time. I just keep coming back and overlooking a huge list saved in the notepad documents on this laptop lol
The pleasure of your company is requested.
The captivating imagery of the tranquil sea merges in a unique ballad with the harmony of love joined by the melody of life.
pope1982 and mrpope1982 celebrate the beginning of our new life together as we are joined as husband and wife Sunday, the first of March Two thousand and nine at seven o'clock in the evening via The Big Fancy Aquarium In Question. Cocktails, intimate seated dining and merriment will follow.
A once in a lifetime opportunity to admire our charming aquarium prior to the ceremony -free of charge- is encouraged. If so desired, please arrive a quarter to six. We ask all of our guests to please report to the staff entrance upon arrival.
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